Please meet Ned McGrath

This is my 'next' attempt at describing my main character. It is more concise but incorporates pretty much the same ideas as my first attempt a few days ago. Comments gratefully accepted.

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A wanted poster describing the man would bring in far too many suspects. The physical description would say: average height and build, light brown hair, blue eyes, high forehead, no scars, large moustache. Ho hum - could he be more ordinary? Well, let me tell you this man was anything but ordinary. His name was Edward Patrick McGrath but he was known to all as either E.P or Ned.

When Ned McGrath strode onto the floor at any gathering he stood much taller than his average height. His impeccable grooming, perfect posture and that fabulous 'stache drew every eye in the room - whether it was a social event or a political assembly. His demeanour commanded attention and respect when he was in attendance. Ned was famous within his largely Irish Catholic community of Mount Sherwood, and beyond. The McGraths were among the pioneer families in this area in the late 19th Century and worked tirelessly with their neighbours to bring progress to the district. Ned's gregarious nature, willingness to help everyone, deep liberal sentiments and devotion to family and community were legendary. None of his siblings were comfortable speaking in public, but Ned had such drive and determination to make life better for all, that he drew approval for many of his ideas and proposals at every opportunity. At several city elections over 25 years, Ned received a winning tide of votes for his platform. The citizens of Dalhousie Ward knew that they would always get a fair shake from this man despite any differences in race, religion, class or background. 

The extended McGrath family looked to Ned for help with chores, repairs and especially for the route to a good time. He had a knack for creating opportunities for fun as well as competition. Life was to be lived and he gave his best shot every time.

The headline in the Ottawa Citizen on December 29, 1932 proclaimed “ Ald. E.P.McGrath dies unexpectedly this afternoon”. He was 68 years old. An article published in the Ottawa Journal the following day, summed up the man that an entire city would mourn.